June 18, 2010

  • ElectricPoetry: The Outline for Existence

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    BEHIND THE POETRY:

    In 2003 I began the ambitious poem cycle called "The Outline For Existence." (posted on this blog HERE.) It was to encompass a total of six epic poems, "A Beginning Again" , "Evolution and History" , "Religion and Dogma" , "Politics and Society", "Conflict and Power", and "Happiness and Understanding". Links provided above are to the poems which I wrote as they appear on my poetry website, ElectricPoetry. I wrote "A Beginning Again" in 2003, and the next two poems in the series in 2004. I never got around to writing the final three.

    This morning, while thinking about the BP offshore oil rig disaster, I came upon a theme for the fifth poem, and I came in here to my computer room with most of the following stanzas already in my head. I've skipped "Politics and Society" for now, but at least I've finally written another chapter in this series, which I wondered for years whether or not I would ever do. So below, I present for you "Conflict and Power", another in the poem cycle, "The Outline of Existence." As usual, if you wish to read the poems written before it, follow the links above, and leave comments below.

    Thank you, Michael F. Nyiri, poet, philosopher, fool


    "Conflict and Power"
    (The Outline for Existence)

    6/18/10
    4:30a.m. pdt

    Creative cogitation
    Territorial thought
    Reach that exceeds grasp
    Conflict of interest
    Wider field of vision
    Fuel for vehicles
    Domination
    Subjugation
    Power

    Mankind creates a need for power
    Fuel for his ever expanding knowledge and ambition.
    He needs electricity to keep the light in his head on forever
    as he initiates inventive ways to control the globe
    on which he lives.

    The concept of home grows with ambition
    Home is where the pocketbook takes one
    Out the opening of the cave and into the night
    guided by the ever shining light in his head.

    His gods granting favor, mankind expands his universe
    Sadly ignoring anyone or anything in his way
    Manifest destiny awaits him
    His intellect allows him to create vehicles from which he may travel
    to unguarded and unknown areas of existence
    His search for power allows him to attempt to find fuels
    with which to power those vehicles
    and as the light grows incredibly brighter for him
    the hopes of mass tolerance and hope for humanity dim.
     
    Where one group of humankind tills the soil of his homeworld,
    Raising his animals and enjoying his bounty,
    the soil is soon bloodied and sullied with the energy
    exacted by the intelligent travelers
    who dominate and subjugate their way into the ranks of peace
    inventing war and conflict
    guns with interchangable parts
    and bullets with a purposeful ending for peaceful coexistence.

    The vehicles, powered by the fuels of ignorance and carelessness,
    trample the lands, carrying the denizens of the new world order.
    Once conflict allows the dominant lifeform to not only survive,
    but completely disintegrate the subdominant culture into itself,
    It sets about to find more fuel
    to fuel more conflict,
    and expand it's empire.

    Trade and money,
    Goods and services,
    These are just some of the lies
    Which power the dominant force of mankind
    As he wields his influence.
    Once settled into new lands,
    His grasp exceeds his reach again,
    Reaching and grasping at length
    Pulling anyone down and out in his way
    As his vehicles, powered by pride, trample and traverse
    even more territory.

    The light doesn't go out for him,
    As he fights stranger, neighbor, and brother.
    As he foils his fathers,
    And turns his back on his own faith.
    He looks around his newfound lands and says "it is good".
    The weak perish and the strong survive,
    fueled on power.
    Power, conflict, power, conflict

    Once ensconced in his new digs, mankind searches through the
    rubble of his conquests for new fuels to power new vehicles.
    He strips the land of it's trees, and digs down through the
    geologic infrastructrue
    venturing farther and farther from reason,
    in his quest for these fuels.
    At some point his quest obliterates his intelligence,
    and he cannot rectify his mistakes,
    so he blames someone else. 

    Still his light burns bright, if only for a
    geologic moment.
    Geology and weather laugh at his inconsistence
    at his ever increasing hunger for power
    and his ever obliterating need for conflict

    In the end the light will go out anyway
    whether or not man is there to flip the switch
    to the "off" position.
    There might be a cosmic punchline to the joke
    yet mankind won't be around to laugh.

Comments (34)

  • :wave: Brilliant and "powerful" -- a lot of "fuel" for thought (apologies for the puns).

    Seriously, the final stanza is prophetically ominous.

    It strikes me that the desire for power was the downfall of a certain angel who then became associated with "evil". (Uh, could it be Satan? Apologies to Dana Carvey & "The Church Lady")

    ~~Blessings 'n Cheers :goodjob: 

  • Wow you are quite a poet! :wave:

  • You described yourself as reaching for epic here and I think you have achieved it. The words paint such a delicate balance that reflectively portrays the way we seem so often to be the cause of so many of our own problems. I really look forward to the "Happiness and Understanding" one as that will bring it full cycle.

  • hello Mike-I'm not saying anything about it-will just make me mad

  • I believe in moderation. And I like your poetry here. Where is that moderate point where our human need to create knowledge and make connections seeps into immoral exploitation? It's a tough question.

  • I just read this aloud to my kids.  Jeremiah asked: Why has man yet to figure out that the earth's resources are limited? Are they in denial~ or really just that naive? Is it really worth the short lived pat on the back?

    I love it when they question the workings of man~ and not accept everything that passes as "it must be a good thing" to the majority.

    Thanks Mike! :goodjob:

  • Mankind has always had a need for some type of fuel. The quest for more efficient and abundant fuels will always be with us as long as we populate the earth.

    Now if we could come up with a fast and  efficient way to clean up oil spills...........

  • I fucking love that ending. I may use it as a quote on my Facebook now. LOVE IT.

  • Powerful! It really encompasses events going on right now.

  • :goodjob:
    Your work is always so polished and inspiring. Thank you!

  • It's been so long since I have had the motivation to write updates again, but don't worry, I will return eventually...

    Hope you're doing well

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