June 18, 2010
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ElectricPoetry: The Outline for Existence
BEHIND THE POETRY:In 2003 I began the ambitious poem cycle called "The Outline For Existence." (posted on this blog HERE.) It was to encompass a total of six epic poems, "A Beginning Again" , "Evolution and History" , "Religion and Dogma" , "Politics and Society", "Conflict and Power", and "Happiness and Understanding". Links provided above are to the poems which I wrote as they appear on my poetry website, ElectricPoetry. I wrote "A Beginning Again" in 2003, and the next two poems in the series in 2004. I never got around to writing the final three.
This morning, while thinking about the BP offshore oil rig disaster, I came upon a theme for the fifth poem, and I came in here to my computer room with most of the following stanzas already in my head. I've skipped "Politics and Society" for now, but at least I've finally written another chapter in this series, which I wondered for years whether or not I would ever do. So below, I present for you "Conflict and Power", another in the poem cycle, "The Outline of Existence." As usual, if you wish to read the poems written before it, follow the links above, and leave comments below.
Thank you, Michael F. Nyiri, poet, philosopher, fool
"Conflict and Power"
(The Outline for Existence)
6/18/10
4:30a.m. pdtCreative cogitation
Territorial thought
Reach that exceeds grasp
Conflict of interest
Wider field of vision
Fuel for vehicles
Domination
Subjugation
PowerMankind creates a need for power
Fuel for his ever expanding knowledge and ambition.
He needs electricity to keep the light in his head on forever
as he initiates inventive ways to control the globe
on which he lives.The concept of home grows with ambition
Home is where the pocketbook takes one
Out the opening of the cave and into the night
guided by the ever shining light in his head.His gods granting favor, mankind expands his universe
Sadly ignoring anyone or anything in his way
Manifest destiny awaits him
His intellect allows him to create vehicles from which he may travel
to unguarded and unknown areas of existence
His search for power allows him to attempt to find fuels
with which to power those vehicles
and as the light grows incredibly brighter for him
the hopes of mass tolerance and hope for humanity dim.
Where one group of humankind tills the soil of his homeworld,
Raising his animals and enjoying his bounty,
the soil is soon bloodied and sullied with the energy
exacted by the intelligent travelers
who dominate and subjugate their way into the ranks of peace
inventing war and conflict
guns with interchangable parts
and bullets with a purposeful ending for peaceful coexistence.The vehicles, powered by the fuels of ignorance and carelessness,
trample the lands, carrying the denizens of the new world order.
Once conflict allows the dominant lifeform to not only survive,
but completely disintegrate the subdominant culture into itself,
It sets about to find more fuel
to fuel more conflict,
and expand it's empire.Trade and money,
Goods and services,
These are just some of the lies
Which power the dominant force of mankind
As he wields his influence.
Once settled into new lands,
His grasp exceeds his reach again,
Reaching and grasping at length
Pulling anyone down and out in his way
As his vehicles, powered by pride, trample and traverse
even more territory.The light doesn't go out for him,
As he fights stranger, neighbor, and brother.
As he foils his fathers,
And turns his back on his own faith.
He looks around his newfound lands and says "it is good".
The weak perish and the strong survive,
fueled on power.
Power, conflict, power, conflictOnce ensconced in his new digs, mankind searches through the
rubble of his conquests for new fuels to power new vehicles.
He strips the land of it's trees, and digs down through the
geologic infrastructrue
venturing farther and farther from reason,
in his quest for these fuels.
At some point his quest obliterates his intelligence,
and he cannot rectify his mistakes,
so he blames someone else.Still his light burns bright, if only for a
geologic moment.
Geology and weather laugh at his inconsistence
at his ever increasing hunger for power
and his ever obliterating need for conflictIn the end the light will go out anyway
whether or not man is there to flip the switch
to the "off" position.
There might be a cosmic punchline to the joke
yet mankind won't be around to laugh.
Comments (34)
:wave: Brilliant and "powerful" -- a lot of "fuel" for thought (apologies for the puns).
Seriously, the final stanza is prophetically ominous.
It strikes me that the desire for power was the downfall of a certain angel who then became associated with "evil". (Uh, could it be Satan? Apologies to Dana Carvey & "The Church Lady")
~~Blessings 'n Cheers :goodjob:
Wow you are quite a poet! :wave:
You described yourself as reaching for epic here and I think you have achieved it. The words paint such a delicate balance that reflectively portrays the way we seem so often to be the cause of so many of our own problems. I really look forward to the "Happiness and Understanding" one as that will bring it full cycle.
hello Mike-I'm not saying anything about it-will just make me mad
I believe in moderation. And I like your poetry here. Where is that moderate point where our human need to create knowledge and make connections seeps into immoral exploitation? It's a tough question.
I just read this aloud to my kids. Jeremiah asked: Why has man yet to figure out that the earth's resources are limited? Are they in denial~ or really just that naive? Is it really worth the short lived pat on the back?
I love it when they question the workings of man~ and not accept everything that passes as "it must be a good thing" to the majority.
Thanks Mike! :goodjob:
Mankind has always had a need for some type of fuel. The quest for more efficient and abundant fuels will always be with us as long as we populate the earth.
Now if we could come up with a fast and efficient way to clean up oil spills...........
I fucking love that ending. I may use it as a quote on my Facebook now. LOVE IT.
Powerful! It really encompasses events going on right now.
:goodjob:
Your work is always so polished and inspiring. Thank you!
It's been so long since I have had the motivation to write updates again, but don't worry, I will return eventually...
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