September 1, 2005


  • The following "series" of poetry was inspired by the "Hometown Week" theme on the Featured Grownups Site and blogring. Check them out for more "hometown" themed blog entries this week. "My Hometown", "The Apartment", and "Large and Empty House" have all been featured on this blog before. The 91770 Express poems are newly transcribed. The others are from the ElectricPoetry website. where all of my work is slowly but surely being "published" to the world wide web. MFN


     



    "My Hometown"
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    ©  1971 (17 years old)
    Previously posted on Xanga 5/17/05


    Robots sucking up the dust
    Lamplights perpendicularly perfect
    New parkinglot
    4 gasstation corners harboring
      hungry automobiles
    Gang hangout over on Shirley St.
    Gang hangout over on Eunice St.
    Gang hangout on the boulevard
    One lamplight bending unpependicularly ruining the scenery
    Of ripped open storefronts and
    ripped off merchandise and
    ripped up billboards and
    black spraypaint on the
    policestation walls.


    Robots spewing forth exhaust
    White parallel lines on the road
    Black rubber marks in the intersection
    Gang hangout in the hardware store
    Gang hangout in the food store
    Gang hangout in two of the
    4 gasstation corners...



    Robots collecting money
    Robots arresting violators
    Robots applauding entertainers
    Gang hangout downtown
    Gang hangout uptown
    Gang hangout across the street
    Robots this gang hangout there
    Robots that gang hangout here


    Robots robots robots
    Gang hangout gang hangout gang hangout


    Robots standing under perpendicular lamplight frenching goodnight


    Gang hangout over at city hall



    "91770 Express I"
     Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    ©  1971 (18 years old)



    Morning dawns
    In Rosemead town.
    Sun streams through,
    And brings you down.
    Another day,
    Another night,
    More and more pains
    Crowding in tight.
    Waiting a time,
    For freedom to break,
    Let go the trouble,
    Let go the ache.
    Afternoon comes
    Over Rosemead town.
    Sun overhead,
    Bringing you down.
    Shadows cross
    To conceal the doom.
    You're locked in close
    In your little room.
    Night comes fast
    Over Rosemead town.
    Moon shines light,
    Brings you down.
    Another day, another night
    More and more pains,
    Crowding in tight.


     



    "91770 Express II"
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    ©  1971 (18 years old)


    A gentle sunburst spreads the day with light
    The small city of Rosemead emerges from night.
    To small boys and girls this is just all right.
    But to some there are feelings which aren't so bright.
    Sure, we have our friends
    And our activities
    And our pride
    And our love
    But whose to say whether or not
    There are some in this town
    Who are not satisfied with the grind.
    The sun and smog bothering your eyes.
    The people who talk and betray all their lies.
    The feeling that there's only one supreme
     being in the form of the
     all-mighty dollar that buys.
    If you listen hard you can hear the cries.
    Why is it that
    This town and all others like it
    Just seem to so flatly exist?
    The world has some beauty
    Hidden away somewhere.
    It has to.
    Doesn't it?



    "Coming Home"
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    ©  June 7, 1974 7:50 p.m.



    As often as this, on Friday nights we find
    we have to roam,
    But when you're full, and life seems short
    It's great to be at home.


    My thoughts are mingled with my deeds
    I have erratic ways
    But when my music stops it's play
    I find I count my days


    The roads are paved, but autos crash
    Whatever's illegal, they'll find the stash
    You're living on credit, but God wants cash
    In your Grandmother's grave,
     there's nothing but ash


    While Friday night people cram beer
    down their throats
    And live a small life -
    I never can be at home only once
    That I find I can rest a while


     


    "The Schoolyard'
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    ©  December 12, 1977



    They mold our children's lives
      in the schoolyard.
    They act like bees in hives
      in the schoolyard
    The regiment stops at the bell
      in the schoolyard
    If you don't behave you go to hell
      in the schoolyard.


    I view the little children,
     Innocent,
     Beguiling,
     Touching,
       ...at play.
    From my window I watch
       their lives decay.
    The bell rings
       STOP
     cease moving now
    The schoolyard
       Microcosm of society
       (An oft used phrase.)
    Training like ants in an anthill.
       Authority
       not
       Concern
       *
     Schoolrooms become barracks
      No wonder nobody
       Wants to learn anymore
    They're hardly given the chance


    ...Between the bells.


     


    "The Apartment"
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    ©  Thursday, May 28, 1981 11:05 a.m. (poetry for fools)
    Previously posted on Xanga 11/30/04



    The building stands, pipes leaking brown stained blood.
    A dowdy mother in housecoat trudges to the washroom
    Three-year-olders cavort on the stairs, in the
    courtyard, out by the trashbins- satisfying needs
    for friendship with pasty faced elves.
    The same little games are played even as the
    three-year-olders grow up and move away.
    The building breathes. doors open and the fortunate
    sons tread off to work-the others
    toil in their predictability moving around
    the courtyard visiting manufactured
    neighbors-telling stories-how's the weather.
    The afternoon advances-sun hangs bright
    over pretty divorced women sunning themselves
    while the elves get dirty behind the philodendrons.
    2:30 As the World Turns All My Restless
    Children into a monotonous hum on the 13"
    black and white television sets standing on
    top of 12 year old 25" consoles that will
    never work again.
    4&5&6o'clock the drones return from work
    and the stereo wars begin. In the
    summer its as if life is back from the
    dead...in the winter the lives resume
    from behind closed doors
    Over the years the gunshots and yelling
    and fights and policemen and questions
    about whos sleeping with who subside
    into a crazy quilt of boring samenesses.
    People move from apartment to apartment
    like litte backgammon markers trying to find
    the home quadrant.
    There's a school behind the building and a
    market across the street. These people
    never have to leave if they don't want to.
    Some of us find we lost the inclination long ago.
    Life goes on. New landlords come and go.
    Old parties become legends. When you least
    expect it an apartment becomes vacated
    and then someone "moves in" who might
    have bearings on your own existence.
    The elves play on.
    The televisions continue spouting their
    advertisements and I sit here watching
    the brown stained water seep from
    under the toilet's broken gasket.
    Exactly like blood.



    "Large & Empty House"
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    © April 13, 1995 5:50 pm pst (the saddest poem I've ever written)
    Previously posted on Xanga 7/18/05 and 6/03/05


    I look around and see none of me
         A lot of you
           A little of us
    A couple of birds singing


    Was it not so long ago they sang for us?


    Was there ever an us?
    Or was it just you?


    And me?


    Where do I fit in
    In this large and empty house?


    Where is my voice
    I could cry
    I could laugh


    Sometimes it all seems so funny
    I wanted a house for you
    I wanted to make you happy


    I failed


    Now you're happy with someone else
    Away from this large and empty house


    And since I see none of me
    I leave too
    The birds must be really lonely



    EDIT: 5:02 pm pdt: Occasionally I type in my own name on a google search to find if I show up on other websites besides my own, and I found a wonderful tribute page today that I'd like to share. My internet friend Terry Cuthbert, who recently died of cancer, was one of the most prolific poets on Xanga, and has quite a website on the Homestead server. He and I used to comment about our vast sites. (He paid me the best compliment saying mine was bigger than his (heh heh). I found THIS PAGE on my search, which is a tribute page for other poets on Terry's site. It made me cry, he had never told me about this. Oh Lord Pineapple in a heaven you never believed in when on Earth, I salute you, and thank you, and wish you and the Sarahs were back on Earth again. When the Sarah's left, you knew why, and the rest of us had not a clue. MFN 9/1/05

Comments (40)

  • "The Schoolyard"

    Having 2 kids in the school system here and seeing the way they want children to be robots and not people with their own personalities and fighting constantly with the school authorities over this issue..I can really relate to this poem! :heartbeat:

  • My favorites are "My Hometown" and "Large and Empty House." I am not the best at commenting on poetry, but when I feel it, I like it! Thanks for sharing them with us! N.

  • Oh, Michael.  These are so beautiful.  "The Schoolyard" was my favorite, but they're all fantastic.

  • lovely poetry! i liked the rhythm of the last one, "large and empty house"

    and thanks for your well-thought out comment on my blog. "best of both worlds" i've never seen my life that way. thanks for pointing that out.

    i was reading some of your other posts. boy, it must've been scary living with an AIDS patient!

  • I can't imagine writing that many poems. My poetry muse arrives about one every two or three years, lol.

    Faith

  • And I thought I was the only one doing witty prose lately.

  • Wow, you are quite the poet!  It must have taken a lot of time just typing them ... you get the award for longest daily entries (and most meaningful)!  Keep up the good work!:sunny:

  • thank you so much for stopping by my site and leaving such nice thoughts for me. i really appreciated it!  it's been a lot of fun bopping about and seeing everyone's posting on the featured grownup theme of hometown. you seem to be quite the author. i've enjoyed reading things here!  :lol: yeah, i enjoy attending churches that look like churches, not gymnasiums....call me old-fashioned!  :laugh: please feel free to visit anytime!  bette

  • How unique. No one thought of poetry and songs about their hometowns. :goodjob:

  • Your poem, "Large & Empty House", is so sad... so much emotion in that one. I also liked "The Apartment"... very descriptive. You always have the best posts! :sunny:

  • :love:Such incredible talent you have Mr. Mike!  Your poems are wonderful, echoing the thoughs and feelings of those who don't know how to put them to words....:goodjob:

    :sunny:Your comment to me today (or was it last night, I lost track) made me smile.  I just am so amazed with how the little thing I organized could make such impacts on people.  I'm glad it has touch you so deeply.  :sunny:

    You know what else I like...these emoticons on YOUR site.  I have so many men tell me how much they like playing with them, but the little things don't go well with their "manly" blogs....I like that you have them on your's and your not too cool for them!

    Have a wonderful evening.    ~Denise~

  • Thanks once again for your kind words.  You always make me smile!:)  It's nice to have so many Xanga friends ... everyone is so kind.  Having Xanga friends is much cheaper than going to a Therapist!!!  I haven't had a chance to check out all your sites, I've been crazy lately, but I will definitely take some time and read all your masterpieces!!  Thanks for being a friend ... I really appreciate it (more than you could ever know!)

  • Hi Mike,

    I made it into my office this evening. I've been working mainly out of my home to save on the gasoline (bastards). Thanks for responding to my query on the problems I have with my Mac. Your site isn't the only one I have trouble with when using my Mac. Although they're few and far between, others do give me troubles. I believe it's a certain load of 'active content' some have on their sites.

    Anyway, I really enjoyed reading these poems. 'Coming Home' and 'Large & Empty House' are both quite touching for me. 'Empty House,' I (like many) have been there. You captured the emptiness magnificently. When I wrote of the same thing, it came out in my best form of artistic expressionism, which is my music and lyric writing strengths. Like your poem, the songs I've written are all painfully sad. Well done, Mike!

    I'll post something new this Sunday. I'll be visiting with Little-Egypt and her husband on Friday. Take care.

    Peace.

  • but he believed in you...:heartbeat:

  • Your work amazes me Michael

  • I live between the bells.

    BE blessed!
    Steve :spinning:

  • You've been linked. Linked I say!

    Except some retard traffic with the good stuff.

  • Here are some eProps for you because Drak told me to. And because your site is worthy. And because you're bald.

  • Thank you so much for your flattering comment! It certainly made me :) and I am glad you enjoyed my post on my hometown.  I read your other entries and they were fantastic. I look forward to the video of you tomorrow...heck, maybe I'll just stay home tomorrow night and watch the Karaoke on your xanga. :lol:

    If Toronto were my hometown, I would have to write a book about it! It is such an amazing city, there is lots to do, and hthe city has still maintained its cultural celebrations and rich diversity despite many changes. "A clean New York with no crime"...very true!

    If you want proof that I really am a beautiful young woman, I could send you a pic of me I guess HEHE. :giggle:

    You're more than welcome to subscribe to my xanga, as I am subscribing to yours. :wave:

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