April 15, 2011

  • ElectricPoetry: A Chlorophylled Life

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    "A Chlorophylled Life"
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    4/15/11 7:00am pdt

    As the springtide arrives, so does the leaf:
    this recent birth of life from an ancient tree

    Small coiled tendil, fragile, translucent green
    At the end of the branch, life where there was none before
    A mottled still brown with a vibrant emerald presence attached.

    Silver veins surge with a symphony of power
    The small tender leaf begins to unfurl
    As if in slow motion, this new life breathes
    Strong winds, sudden rainfall, nothing stops her
    singular path toward fulfillment

    From diaphanous burgeoning beginnings
    edges now serrated in synchronous symbolism
    the tiny branchlike veins reaching out across
    the verdant countryside of her landscape,
    the leaf uncoils to her bounteous exultant beauty

    The spring may soon pass
    but the leaf remains, in place, in command, in
    righteous indignation against all odds
    flapping about wildly in the breeze

    In time she is joined by similar shining new leaves
    sprouting
    from the branches in wave after wave
    of malachite colored ecstasy

    Where a few months before
    only twigs stick out in space
    Now hundreds of brothers and sisters
    abound, rippling with the wind
    surging in the sun

    Throughout the summer
    the leaf grows
    thickening with this chlorophylled life
    gaining sustenance
    from the ancient tree
    whose roots troll the ground
    and whose branches reach to the sky
    providing the leaf with the
    grace of the sunlight

    As summer passes into the fall,
    the once supple leaf begins to show cracks
    in her surface
    She breathes a little less fulsome
    Her edges are a bit more serrated
    her color becomes darker with age

    For the tree, these passing of seasons
    are hardly noticed
    The tree remains in place, spring after spring
    summer after summer
    heralding the beginning of the end when fall arrives

    Slowly, seemingly without warning,
    but in a story which plays out every year,
    the soft green glow of the leaf fades to brown
    Edges which once were sharp now crackle
    inwards
    The rich thick stem becomes a bit unsteady
    and the flow of chlorophyll begins to
    flow less steadily
    from a river
    into a trickle of life
    and such is the trick of this life

    Winter is on the horizon
    Cold winds sear into the now dark brown skin of the leaf
    Her aged veins hardly contain her
    Her withered stem cannot hold her for long
    Rains which two seasons ago were
    life giving showers now mock her
    attempting to sever the bond which holds her
    to mother tree.

    Eventually, weather's erratic behavior
    and time's ever constant stamina
    are no match for the fragile stem which
    attaches the leaf to her food supply

    It takes only a small moment
    A sideways glance into cosmic certainty
    A sliver of the Universal endurance
    The breeze now a twisting zephyr
    The rain now a pounding torrent

    The elements cut the umbilical quickly
    and the leaf begins it's one and only
    flight
    down,
    free from the tree of life which sustained her
    free from the bonds of existence.

    The leaf sails unheeded to the ground
    cracked and brittle
    one of a thousand in a pile
    compost for the heap

    leaving existence in the wind


    BEHIND THE POETRY: The very first poem I ever wrote was in 1967, when I was in junior high. It is called "A Cholorophyll Filled Death" and is a metaphorical view of life from the perspective of a leaf, blowing in the wind. Although the poem itself (linked from the title) isn't very good, it is apt that even at the age of 14, I was more philosophical than most of my peers. I rewrote the poem as a depressive view of suicide in 1971 as "Depresson II". I've always wanted to rewrite it again, which prompts today's poem. It's National Poetry month and this is the only poem I've written so far this month. As the years pass, my muse seems to call less often. But hopefully what I lack in quantity of output, I make up for in quality. I am satisfied to know that I'm still writing poetry (and even writing the same poem, thematically) after all these seasons. (The photo was taken from a websearch and is not one of mine.) MFN/ppf

Comments (40)

  • Powerful imagery.  I'd never thought of a leaf so symbolically.  

  • You've still got the skill, man. I love this.

  • Wow, you wrote this well. Such a beautiful life and elegant death.

  • I never thought I'd ever see a poem as lovely as a tree... but here it is

  • I love how you have adjusted this poem over the years, as your responses to life have adjusted.

    Most beautiful~

  • You really are a natural poet. I could hard make a rhyme when I was in junior high.

  • Wonderful poem, Mike. I love this.

  • Certainly, a quality poem, but I believe all of your poetry would be quality. This one is a wonderful poetic description of seasons, but also about life and death, with the symbol of a "leaf". ~~Blessings 'n Cheers

  • Classy, well written. A true poet! I love it!!!

  • I think it's wonderful that you still write poetry.  I haven't written a poem in years and sometimes that makes me sad and sometimes I just think that's the way life is.  You're awesome, never stop writing!

  • This is a great poem about time and seasons and loss and rebirth.

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