May 17, 2005
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I wrote an angry poem the other day. I like to say I’m a passionate person, and this passion sometimes exerts itself on the emotion of anger, which in some cases can be negative, especially if I direct that anger at a specific person. A good friend once remarked that I have the capability, through observation and an almost tactless sense of honesty, to hurt people’s feelings rather easily. Nobody has ever remarked, however, about the capability of my own feelings to be hurt. However, this poetry post will include my latest “angry” poem last, and will also contain quite a few “angry” poems throughout the years. I received some “comments” in the past couple of Poetry Posts that remarked there was so much to read, that they didn’t know how to respond, or were simply overwhelmed at the amount of poems I post at one time. Well, folks, this won’t be any different. I post in “themes” and I have written a lot over the years. Some of these poems have been featured on this blog before, but I’m always seeing new subscriptions and new comments from new readers, so I don’t mind “recycling”. If someone has read a particular poem then just skip it. I’ll be kind enough to remark Previously Posted in white after the date if it has been posted in a WhenWordsCollide entry before if I remember. I don’t mind reading poems over and over again if I like them, and perhaps some of you enjoy rereading poems I present in other contexts. All these poems come from my life and experience, and were “locked up” for many years, so they like to get out and “breathe” every now and then, like when you a fine bottle of wine is uncorked after sitting in the cellar for many years. Here goes, some angry poems from the vaults of ElectricPoetry:
“Escape”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© 1971 (17 years old) Previously Posted
They start their wars
They scream their complaints
They forget about sanity
They lock humanity within itself
And life is even forgotten
While we cease to be free
They consume their answers
They regress to childhood
Peace lies dormant
At the bottom of their trash heap
And creatures die daily
Nobody cares about the world
A window stares at us
They built it for light
And light it is
A method for escape from
This cluttered battered
Dying world in which we exist
A gaping aperture offers escape
From their forlorn environment
But once outside into
Their stagnant air
One wonders if this is the way out
Or if he should collapse their way
“Linear Projection”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© 1971 (17 years old)
They huddled in the corner,
Telling secrets to their ears.
Glancing at the dangers,
Whispering lies to ease their fears.
Looking up,
Then back again.
The end will soon be near.
You and me
And they and we
May have to end life here.
Amongst the falling embers
Came the hope they craved receiving.
Love and common laughter
Bred the faith they turned believing.
Turning to
Then back again.
The end will soon be near.
You and me
And they and we
May have to end life here.
There came from the horizon
A flash they called salvation.
Truth told them the better,
‘Twas the finish of their nation.
Praying now
Then back again.
The end will soon be near.
You and me
And they and we
Will have to end life
Here.
“My Hometown”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© 1972
Robots sucking up the dust
Lamplights perpendicularly perfect
New parkinglot
4 gasstation corners harboring
hungry automobiles
Gang hangout over on Shirley St.
Gang hangout over on Eunice St.
Gang hangout on the boulevard
One lamplight bending unpependicularly ruining the scenery
Of ripped open storefronts and
ripped off merchandise and
ripped up billboards and
black spraypaint on the
policestation walls.
Robots spewing forth exhaust
White parallel lines on the road
Black rubber marks in the intersection
Gang hangout in the hardware store
Gang hangout in the food store
Gang hangout in two of the
4 gasstation corners…
Robots collecting money
Robots arresting violators
Robots applauding entertainers
Gang hangout downtown
Gang hangout uptown
Gang hangout across the street
Robots this gang hangout there
Robots that gang hangout here
Robots robots robots
Gang hangout gang hangout gang hangout
Robots standing under perpendicular lamplight frenching goodnight
Gang hangout over at city hall.
“Quiet Quarrel”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© December 31, 1982 4:45 p.m.
Silence speaks such serenity
Anger always arrives too soon.
A little compassion, a little fruition
And at times we will all sing in tune.
If nothing but peace falls to pieces
And with anger arriving too soon
I speak for compassion, no growth intuition
No soft pure and bright honeymoon.
Even elysium always away
Tension tugs, terror regains
No more that compassion, it gives no fruition
And soft pleasures, they turn to harsh pains.
“My Rules- You Lose”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© November 24, 1983 7:45 p.m. Previously Posted
Shall we read the tattered rulebook with respect
Reap a real well rounded wisdom with our peers
Or throw away the numbered steps within our sect
Mount the muskets, strap on bandoliers
Should we stop a while,
admire the golden sun
Reap ripe rich rewards on bended knee
Or strike fast first
and then before we’ve done
Cleanse the Earth, Jehovah’s impurity
In a second’s glance an eon stops his tracks
Irreversible fury feigning purest calm
No one has the time to ponder facts
With relative ease, existence we’ll embalm
“T.A.S. (teen age suicide)”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© May 21, 1984 5:48 p.m. Previously Posted
Underneath this yellowed pall
There lived a raging youth; a soul who dreamed it all
He wore his heart naked
Exposed to the hurt
Now it no longer beats it just lay in the dirt
Underneath this open gaze
The eyes which once burned bright, a knowing steely gaze
He saw too much
Exposed to the hurt
Now he belongs on his back in the dirt
This world wasn’t made for our children
This time is too brutal and scary
They know they are smarter than we were
And they haven’t the time to be wary
Underneath this chunk of skin
There lived a vital truth, but it did not fit in
It called out to us
But no one would listen
Now it no longer speaks, it’s chords are bitten
“Monkey Bidness Redux”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© March 3 , 2000 6:21 p.m. pst
With apologies to Chuck Berry.
Pulled up to the fillin station, paid too
much money for the gas
Planes fly through the Burbank wall
I’ve got to save my a**
Try to access all my websites
Homestead’s on the fritz
Can’t expound, computer’s down
My sites aren’t gettin hitz
Too much monkey bidness
Too much monkey bidness
Too much monkey bidness for me to get involved in
Go to work, and get a sale,
The boss berates my savvy
I need new specs the doc says man
You need bifocals. Heavy!
The primary’s tomorrow, and the
candidates seem like they’re on the Golden Globes show.
I’d laugh, it all seems funny but I wonder where it will all go?
Too much monkey bidness
Too much monkey bidness
Too much monkey bidness for me to be involved in.
Saw the kids play in the yard,
They skateboard in front of my car
I try to be a nice guy
But is this some kind of turf war?
Too many games, too many shames,
Too many times to get it wrong.
So I’ll sit down, maybe have a beer,
And sing this little song,
Too much monkey bidness
Too much monkey bidness
Too much monkey bidness for me to be involved in.
BaDoomDoom
“Perceived Crazy Actions In Sanity Lie”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© July 13th, 2003 9:38 a.m. pdt Previously Posted
Inside, deep, dedicated, heartfelt, I know the feelings are let loose,
And the pent up inefficiencies of others’ illusions do not touch my psyche at all.
Oh, they think they know it all and only know what they don’t,
and I have always sworn that I know nothing,
But yet feel all…..
And each week I read and hear of life’s little skirmishes which result in pain,
And lingering,
And death,
And destruction.
And each day I feel that I am not a part of this insanity, and that in sanity, I live
untouched, but futilely feeling of the fervent fevers of frustration that
Cause the masses to unleash this bubbling anger
I was untouched perhaps, and then,
Unknowing and unwanting, the full force of insanity’s blows hit me left right and center,
I am a malleable dummy, pushed inside out with incredible ease,
By the purported sabotage inflicted by those for whom I once held respect.
The days can pass without knowledge.
That existence can deny reality is a truth as old as our consciousness.
I am rife with hurt and agonize now nightly
Because inconsequential inconsistencies can be set up as emotional bullets
Which rip my self satisfied facade to burnt shreds.
Are those whom I respected yet do not now playing games with my psyche?
Are they who are clueless to clarity charting the course of my life?
Are the inmates running the asylum of insanity?
And, In Sanity, do I live in my skin?
Or, does insanity live in my skin, as they think?
Because they never knew anything anyway. They choose to believe what they see.
I know I am sanity solidified, shouting only because they can’t hear.
That is the way it has always been. That is the way it is.
The clueless and the cancerous cacophany of indifference, laughing
All the way to smug delight,
Cannot know truth,
Cannot know pain,
Cannot know what it does to me.
So I am called by the insane as in sanity I trust.
“Do you think you need help?” they ask trustingly,
Unbeknownst to them that the sabotage did not begin yesterday,
And the ineffectual stupidity of mankind, who documents each tirade
as if it were insanity’s call to arms,
And his ticket out of inconsequentialness,
Because he is smarter than I had thought.
“They know how to push your buttons”, they told me.
“They are hurt by your truthfulness.”
Truth hurts.
And I have always thought I could see the truth coming.
But I didn’t see this coming.
That is because it is not life’s truth,
But life’s lies,
And the talent to proceed will never hamper the truth in my eyes.
Here’s the new one:
“Ebullient Agony”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
© May 14th, 2005 10:54 a.m.
Responding to harbingers of hollow hellos
hanging from handmedown recollections
Quelling desperate dogmas of delusion
dangling from draconian dungeons
dripping with the blood of sullied soldiers
of solitude
saluting salacious stupidity
Ever increasing stipends of squalor
signifying stasis
scurrying about with no purpose
Answering questions which do not exist
?
Encouraging bounties which wither
in the sweeping soft scarred
dalliances of forgotten youth
as they persist
Asking of humanity why
Listening to answers that barely exist
Perpetual ebullient agonies cry in pain
Pleasurable perfidy astounds
Eyes without sight abounding
The dead are only buried in the ground
And knowledge utters not a sound
Responding to callow calumnies
disguised as innocent innoculations against
sanity
Breaking the mirror as one stares
at mass vanity
Insouciance overwhelms
as diatribes against monothiestic
magnitudes magnify morose maleficence
and niggling knockdown dragouts
diefy dogeared dalliances with
no purpose at all
And no one responded to the call
Does the cry of yellowed youth
appear as a scream of surreptitious
yearning
?
Do the garbled phone calls to 911
from murderous satanic perpetrators
of unthinkable theories of doom
herald their eventual salvation
?
Or has the whole da*n world gone crazy
Ebullient agony awash in the blood of the innocent
Two battered and bloody
lives held out in the balance of boisterous monstrosity
found by the same maleficent murderer
of common sensical living and good works
Responding to the harbingers of hollow hellos
the poet screams with no meanings for maligned memory
as the news stories repeat the ebullient agony of
lost souls
ravaged by time
Questioning, responding, ranting, roiling with
no regard to circumstance,
one can only cry to Heaven
one can only ask why
never to begin the response
And never to gain understanding
as the devil dogs chew up the reasons in the distance
Comments (11)
Wow Mike,
That last poem just had “S” all over the place. And, all the previous ones just painted quite the picture of that time and place in your life. I guess in regards to your opening comments, it is good that my memory escapes me at times. I read your poetry on many of your sites, yet I do not see it as something I can’t come to again. Sometimes life gets put into perspective when you read something that you had before.
Personally I enjoy reading your poems for they have me think about myself and my situations. They help me to learn also of another’s perspective … and I find the “world’s” of other people so very interesting.
As for my being ill. Fortitude is at times folly – I have learned this myself … LOL. But, you shouldn’t feel bad about it for I know all I had to do was open my mouth and state I was not well and I know you would have done what you could. But I was REALLY having such a good time that I did not want to give in to it … I seriously didn’t. I am foolish like that. Like the time I was at home and had a panic attack (thought I was having a heart attack). My mom was worried because she said I looked pale and was sweating profusely … I told her I would just walk it off … my dad almost carried me to the car to take me to the emergency room as well … but I refused. After an hour I got better … but I tend to do that … be stubborn that is. Though I will be sure to tell you any other time we are out and about that I might not be well so you don’t have to guess or pay that close attention. I apologize if my stubborness upset you … but know that I had a most wonderful time on Sunday.
Love & Friendship,
Liz
Hi Mike.
The earlier poems certainly were not afraid to speak their anger. It’s remarkable to read through them though, to see how the anger gets directed as you age and mature.
lisa
You hit the proverbial nail on the head when you said anger. I am not sure, but I think my computer is smoking from those, especially the most recent one. Powerful words and powerful emotions, Mike.
Mike,
I certainly needed those anger poems today! I felt like you spoke for me. You know I think mother nature had our voodoo dolls out and was reaking havoc today!
I am so sorry your friend is so misguided (in my opinion) and did not see the humor — it’s is the humor you weave that I love most!
Thanks for the kinds words, I needed and appreciated them today!
~Catbert
Thank you for your kind words. They lit up my day and my heart. You’re such a doll! I’m attempted to kidnap you! Lol… Sorry, being silly again! wink Anyway, the three poems that stuck out for me were T.A.S., Monkey Bidness Redux, and the newest one. I felt the anger and it just about broke my heart. Ignorance, greed, and selfishness of people has caused me to lose most of the faith I once had in humanity. Every once and a while though, you meet someone that puts a little faith back in you and you are one of those people for me. You are such a wonderful, wonderful, WONDERFUL (Did I say wonderful?!) person that I’ve had the pleasure of meeting on here. Thank you, Mike. :shysmile:
I just want to hug you, you are so sweet!
And I am just too tired to read and comment on today’s post…I do temp office work, which is both interesting and terrible, depending on where you are, and pays nothing, and you never get enough hours, etc. etc., but I worked today…some cut & paste on today’s locale. REally not too bad. It was an upper end manufacturer of mountain-climbing outerwear, large, open space, hardwood floors, mostly all young healthy types, by the end of the day it seemed all the men were carrying various glasses and cups of a darkish amber beer topped with a nice creamy head back to their desks! Now where was that barrel? Vivid blue pilates balls under desks for them to stretch a bit at any time… hmnn. Company exports worldwide, vast clientele based on perfectionist sewing and style. Looked like good gear to me, but what do I know? You’d never catch me hanging on bare rock half way up the face of a mountain like they showed in their catalogue though!
After being up most of the night on the poster, grocery shopping, I’m retiring to bed to try to write something on the photopoem that only the photo part has happened so far…
Is today’s generally and circuitously on anger? I browse too quickly. And what I want to know, is do you keep extensive file systems to find poems that span your entire writing life, or are they on a database that you can just put in key words and up pops poems, or is it your profound memory where you remember everything you ever wrote? Sometimes I come across my writing from earlier times, and don’t recognize it! I think my style’s different now to earlier too…
xo
Dear Mike…
I sincerely hope you did not take offense to my previous comment about the content of your postings. In no way did I mean to imply I wish for it to change… I was just stating the reason that some of my feedback on your entries is not as in depth as others.
“Escape”: “They consume their answers…they regress to childhood…peace lies dormant at the bottom of their trash heap, and creatures die daily…” For such insights to come from the mind of a 17 year old… I don’t know why these lines amaze me so much… since I was definately noticing the worlds ability to overlook LIFE when I was at that age… but these lines make me angry… very very angry.
Linear Projection: “Amongst the falling embers came the hope they craved receiving… Love and common laughter, bred the faith they turned believing…” The title is wonderful, the content is brilliant as well… I love the repetition of the ending of each stanza and the lines mentioned above… perfect flow.
My Hometown: “Robots sucking up the dust… lamplights perpendicularly perfect…” these two lines… the first two… suck the reader in and they do not let go until you are finished. A portrait of urban and now suburban america in a truely honest and horrifying form.
Quiet Quarrel: “Even elysium always away… tension tugs, terror regains… no more that compassion, it gives no fruition… and soft pleasures, they turn to harsh pains.” This entire writing I thought profound, the metaphors are sublime, the flow impeccable (as usual), and brings to mind the struggles I have with my own demons (tangible and intangible) through my self condemning silences.
My Rules- You Lose: “In a second’s glance an eon stops his tracks… irreversible fury feigning purest calm…” In these lines you have personified time… how is that possible? This amazes me.
T.A.S.: “He saw too much… exposed to the hurt… now he belongs on his back in the dirt…” These lines feel like home to me. The whole poem, truly. It further reinforces my decision to not have children (can’t have them anyways). I look at the world and I see much beauty, my experiences allow me to look beyond the now “normal” horrors of daily life… but I could never put a child through a world that does not realize they exist.
Monkey Bidness: “Too many games, too many shames, too many times to get it wrong… so I’ll sit down, maybe have a beer, and sing this little song…” Mike I absolutely adored this piece. It was so foreign from what I am accustomed to reading here… it was great, and it was singing itself in my head.
Perceived Crazy…: “And each day I feel that I am not a part of this insanity, and that in sanity, I live untouched, but futilely feeling of the fervent fevers of frustration...” This whole write… blew through me like a frieght train at 70 mph… your wordings in this one scorch the brain, you leave ashes in your wake.
Ebullient Agony: “Pleasurable perfidy astounds… eyes without sight abounding… the dead are only buried in the ground… and knowledge utters not a sound.” Every line so powerful I had to read them each twice, just to feel the bruising of your words… this world… you invoke much thought with each separate piece of this post. It was entirely phenominal, smoldering in anger, and very understated… I liked that very much about it.
and now RYC’s: Your support is magnificent. Even when I am bed ridden and can not read your work no matter how badly I long to, you still drop by, offer support, advice, praise, opinion… and every letter of every word makes me feel a little better and a little stronger. I am still not well… but I could no longer keep myself away from my readers… and I wanted to issue you a very special thank you for making a tearful face brighten with a smile. Thank you Mike.
No, no, of course I’m not older than 18 or 19. I’m younger than that. That’s why I asked how old you thought I was, because you mentioned ‘college’ in your previous comment, and I’m just now going to be a senior in high school next year. That’s all, haha.
And I like the Monkey Bidness Redux poem the best… :fun:
Sarah.
Have I ever told you before how much I love your comments? You take such care to respond. It’s great.
I loved your admission about Buddy Holly. That is probably a very fascinating story and I’d love to hear more about it.
If you ever remember the writer’s name, let me know. Hey, I’m 35 and always have senior moments. What do you suppose that means?
I don’t know why the photo’s appear elongated. I definitely shrink them to fit in the blog but, as far as I can tell by my own screen, they look normal. I wonder what other people see?
lisa
Dear Michael,
:wave: I’m back! Thank god the semester is over, this was a tough week! It’s a pleasure to be reading your work again, and I picked a prime day to stop by. Of the older poems, “My Hometown” was my favorite. Something about the rhythm absolutely captivated me. It was so original. “Ebullient Agony” is brilliant and dumbfounding. The alliteration is very present, but you balance it with so many other techniques it simply adds to the overall texture. Ah, it’s so complex, but I’ve used up all my analysis this week. I have none left! lol. Interestingly, I don’t find these especially “angry.” I don’t know if that exposes some strange truth about me, but I viewed most of these as societal commentary. Biting commentary, yes, but I’m not sure anger is the word I’d use.
Cheers!
Stacey
Dear Michael, i re-read your entire posting, each poem, each word, each thought so strong. This bears much re-reading! I will be returning to this one several times to absorb and study. My god, you help me focus my thoughts in a way i no longer thought i could do. As always, your poetry makes my mind reach and stretch, encompass and closely examine. Thank you. Well, for everything Michael.
On a secondary thought; i read your Paradigm Shifting, wow…. here’s a great big toast to you! Please keep that one going my friend, you have my entire attention there. I’ve had alot of experience with the various internet “VR” worlds since 1996. As well as the ‘old fashioned’ method of multi-sided dice and rulebooks, over the years. Though i don’t do those anymore, i find that everytime someone invents a new sort of “world” for people to explore, there are always inherant, and subversive traps within the fine, glossy, shiney, happy “world” that is presented. Very sneaky methods indeed to ‘dumb down’ a generation, by offering them methods to mentally zone out for far too many hours a week. Or perhaps years. (this is how i see the RP world in the rearview, and how i see it in through the telescope as well, not an illegal drug, but an addictive agent just the same).
I have read Necromancer, and part of the sequel to that novel, (though it has been years), and that too stirred thoughts along the same lines as your Paradigm Shifting has. Most definately a group of thoughts that need expanding and exploring upon! I loved the future timeline you had outlined there. Very, very grand arena of future history you have spelled out. I’m extreemly anxious to see where all you go with that story! If you’de like a good reference author that i go to, i do suggest Larry Niven. His expressions of how the known worlds become as people become “Wireheads” is both frightening and all too close to reality right now. If you want a specific book, all to do is ask, i keep a large library of his works.
Please keep me posted on Paradigm Shifting, im incredibly anxious to ride that particular rollercoaster!
~Lynxkatt