February 1, 2005

  • ElectricPoetry Post: 1978 and a New Poem

    Here are some more of The Cathy Poems, which are a series of sixty poems written in the year 1978 for Cathy Davidson. As longtime readers of this blog might remember,  I tried to win her love for a nearly a year. Beginning in April, and commencing until December of 1978, I composed sixty poems, almost in a row, and gave Cathy copies as I wrote them. When the "courtship" ended without her reciprocation, I presented her with a small hardbound book with the complete hand written series in order. This is the third  Xanga blog entry containing these "Cathy Poems" Other entries can be read on the December 13th and November 9th entries of WhenWordsCollide. The complete series of poems already transcribed is available on the 1978 page of ElectricPoetry

     

    "Thank You for You" (a Cathy poem)
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    © April 2nd, 1978 6:00 p.m


    Tarnished memories have stirred my soul
    When present times feel bad.
    I've never felt so much so whole
    As when remem'bring
            life as a lad

    So I've been beset by broken luck,
    And beginning to feel sad
    I'll go back to rut in which I'm stuck
    And think of all the
            good times I've had.

    Yet now life smiles upon your face
    And shows me your smile is real
    I look in your eyes & my problems erase
    Could this be emotion I feel?

    I just want to say
        Since I met you that day
            I felt you were special
                And really sincere.
    Thank you for you
        And I'll tell you it's true
            That whatever you say
                I will listen and care.

     


    "Another Morning Again" (a Cathy poem)
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    © April 25th, 1978


    And again and again
    blew 80 bucks over my day off
    had a lot of fun
        just trying to forget the vacancy left by you
    and tonight
    when
    maybe I could say hello
    you'll not be there
    and I'll miss you

    It's hilariously funny
    I know
    I only see you at work
    And you're bored at work
    I wish I could spend
    All of our eternities together
    But that's (as usual) asking too much

    I wish for just another moment
    with you
    You inspire me (that's not just an idle compliment),
    You fill my meager existence with meaning.
    You listen to what I say

    And I haven't said it all yet.

    Clock in clock out go home
    You forget me as soon as I'm gone
    I'll remember you forever.
    I love you.


    "Open the Drawer"  (a Cathy poem)
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    Written on my birthday, © May 1, 1978


    She shyly rolled her eyes
    And never looked exactly, into mine.
    "Let's be just friends" she'd say.
    And it would always be that way.

    Then there was another
    Knew her for about a week
    The poems cascaded out of me
    As leaves to the bottom of a mug of tea.

    The metaphor for love was never truth
    It sneaked right in to steal my soul
    My dreams disappeared into the dark
    Cupid's arrow was always missing its mark.

    I see a gentle meadow
    Feel a lover's mellow kiss
    Sit beside me on the grass
    The visage all a wish

    Now
    A wistful smile giving herself away
    Manipulating my free desires
    I told you that I loved you
    But you read that word
    In a million other poems
    And can't make up your mind
    till you unterstand its meaning

    Believe me when I tell you
    The word itself is ridiculous
    The metaphor for love is emotion
    Tears fighting their way into
    Everyday conversation
    For no other reason
    Than that you'll never be mine.

    And I find I want to be possessive
    Because I've said all that I've said
    And I find that I'm jealous
    If you give your time to others
    What gives me this right?
    What gives me this inclination.
    I'm supposed to be on the sidelines
    Rooting for your team

    Hooray!
    Hooray!
    Who will win?
    What will be the score?
    Who will suffer the injuries?

    Now I'm fighting too hard to possess you
    Maybe the end is near.
    When you tell me you don't care
    And it's getting to be ridiculous
    Then I can write a
    Last love song
    for you
    As I cry

    Again.


    I also wrote a new poem this morning so will take the opportunity to post it on this entry. MFN

    "Wholly Rolling Emotion"
    Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
    © February 1, 2005 4:41 a.m. pst

    Holes in my socks this morning
    Seems like holes in my socks every morn
    Searching through drawers
    For a reason
    But each pair, it seems
    Seems to be torn

    Don't know why I put holey socks back
    Seems like all drawers are full as can be
    With gaping holey socks
    Which just can't be darned
    And the darn things
    Just overwhelm me

    The answer of course is to buy more
    But in future more holes will appear
    For some reason I don't
    Toss out old pairs
    Holey socks here
    On my feet I wear

    Holes in my heart this morning
    Seems like holes in my heart every morn
    Searching through memories
    For a reason
    But the holes, it seems
    Leaves me forlorn

    Don't know why holes in my heart attack
    Seems like each past love rends with despair
    With gaping holes bleeding love
    In a broken, fragile heart
    This just doesn't
    seem to be fair

    Holes in my socks
    Holes in my heart
    Feeble rotten luck
    Will love for me 'ere start?

     

Comments (11)

  • What a lovely way to start my day! The holey socks phenomenon...My husband is also a victim. I think I'll raid the drawer today and dispose of them. But maybe that's too invasive. Thanks for the idea about getting rid of the banner in my photo. I'll photoshop that out when I get home. I'd like to set up a link in my custom module to my poetry, get it all in one place and unbury some of my older (better) stuff. How would I do that?

  • I've written poems inspired by love for a woman, women.  But am unable to write one "for" such.  Somehow, the 'reach' goes always beyond. 

  • That's so awesome that you did that for a year! Tomorrow WHEN I'M AT SCHOOL and feel like I'm wasting my time, I'll go into the computer lab and do something productive like read all 60 of those. I'm dying to know what they say!

    As for the composoite, that's SO AWESOME. I've never been used in art before. I saved that pic on my computer for future reference. It reminds me of how I feel when I lay down in bed and get really dizzy (vertigo I assume) or when I'm dreaming... I have really awkward and surreal dreams. Right on! :)

    Also, who is playing on your xanga? That song is so great!

  • Cathy must have been quite a woman!  I'm not sure if I have it in me to comment on 60 poems but I did leave some on ElectricPoetry.  I don't think I've written that many collectively yet.  Have a great day!

  • Mike,

    What Avast website you have! (sorry, had to do it!!!) That site is very in depth and contains far more information than mine probably ever will! Kudos on all of that hard work shipmate. If you join blogrings, please join mine, I use it as my Sites I Read List (believe it or not!)

    I also happen to love cutthroat Island! HA! Great minds think alike. I have not heard of the other movie you mentioned so I am going to have to look about amazon and see if I cant hunt up DVD for my collection! Thanks for the great tip.

    Super job on those poems (Whatever you do, DONT read my attempts at poetry under The Author MM page on Dpebooks.com.... methinks pirates and poetry do not mix!)

    Sail on... sail on!!!

  • Thank you for dropping one and joining the Crew. We are an active bunch so odds are, you will gain traffic!

    Sail on... sail on!!!

  • a very poignant work, the one about socks

    I really appreciate the attitude you took toward my poem, with much of my work I just let images and thoughts flow together instead of aiming for a central theme, I do however love it when a reader extracts a meaning that I had not seen out of the words, but I do agree with you that it's sometimes just as rewarding to simply immerse yourself in the words for the words sake, and leave translation for later

  • Holes in my heart ... it's amazing how four small words can say so much. I'm feeling very holey today ... too much time to think, I guess; regret and sadness are overwhelming me right now. I need to get away from this computer and put in a few kilometers on my treadmill.

    I know exactly how you felt about progressives - just the thought of them conjures up images I'd rather not deal with - but I'm willing to give them a shot if they'll stop the misery!

    Thanks for stopping in. I'm always glad to see you and thoroughly enjoy your comments - they're so elegant and thought-provoking. And you never fail to make me smile! :)

    Take good care of you! :wave:

  • What an incredible gift! Even though she didn't reciprocate, what woman would not be amazed by this!

    ~lisa

  • Honestly, what an incredible gift! So, she didn't reciprocate, I'm sorry. But, what woman would not remember this for the rest of her life?

    These are beautiful and tear at my heart.

    lisa

  • I visited multiple web sites but the audio feature for audio songs
    existing at this web site is genuinely excellent.

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