July 24, 2004
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Like Ships That Pass Etc.
poetry by Michael F. Nyiri 1971
We come here every day
And sit and stare
And work
And occasionally I steal a glance at you
And you look back.
Then we turn away
To what we were doing
And concentrate
And feelings pass through our heads
And we don’t know what it means.
You are so beautiful
I say quietly
I curse
And watch you patiently never knowing
That you watch me too.
We come here every day
And we wonder
Why we falter
In grasping each other’s emotions
Then we turn our backs again.
And silently cry.
(NOTE: This is the first poem I post whenever I join a group. I think it’s my own favorite work. I wrote it in my Senior year of high school. (I projected the word “work” because I was in fact still in school, but I always wrote “above my years” in high school. I wrote “I’ve felt all the feelings without living all the life” in 1971.) MFN)
Comments (3)
:heartbeat:You know this is what women like to read…whoa! lived the life …felt the feelings…but you added such gentleness that made it too much!
i’ve felt that way so many times before..thanks for making me remember..
Hi mike…
If you ever come to Texas, Feel free to be my guest for a few days and we can go up…or i can hook you up in calf…
I read the comment you made to One consciousness…
It is only in our corporeal selves, i.e. in this existence on the Planet Earth, that we even have the capability of dissecting the “different” planes of consciousness.
very… present thing to see!
(…I had to boost up to see where you were/are..and that is always what i am looking for…
Glad you are on….this is becoming fun!