April 17, 2009
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ElectricPoetry: National Poetry Month Part 2
"Imagimnasium:
(A Wonderment Workout)"
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
04/17/09 5:57 a.m. pdtToday we wonder, in a wonderful way
And we should let our imagination play
Wonder about life, lose our inhibition
Let our fertile earth minds grow with fruition
There is no wonder when we pass
into the outer realm of heaven
All of our questions are answered
All of our worries are overThere is no reason for the mind to wander
When the reason for existence is known to all
As it will be
when we passBut until that time, the time of death
The time when wonders cease
Our minds are active whirlwinds
blowing shards of reality away
Exercise the imagination
Embrace the promise of each coming day"Third Eye Blindness"
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
04/17/09 6:08 a.m. pdtIf I close the bright blue eyes of entity
If I look through the third eye of enlightenment
If I can dream waking of the illusive moment
When we finally meet
If I look closely at what I cannot see
I might steal a glimpse of loveIf I would only be able to merge with
rapturous ardor
If I would only be able to prove
my intent
If I could yield to reality
and open my heart for a moment
I might stand at the shore of solitude
and feel the waves of coupleship
lap at my feet
beackoning
beguiling
bewitchingI break the bubble of my perception
(as usual, sighing)
The waves recede in the distance
and the sun sets into the sea
of seclusion
Cold shivers of realization
strike my frailty
Many times has love arrived
Many times have I stood at the shore
waiting
Many times, many years, many decadesI will close the bright blue eyes of existence
I will look through the third eye of emergence
I will dream of meeting you again
And I will feel of love
I'm looking closely at what I cannot see
A glimpse of stolen love fading away"Explanation"
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
4/17/09 6:27 a.m. pdtI speak but will you listen
And am I making sense?
A yearning will I christen
As I climb down from the fenceI wish to ask you if I care
And does this world revolve?
How much more can I share
Are there riddles I can solve?I might be talking to myself
But was I making sense?
I opened up my soul
without vanity or pretenseI've said what I want to say
But did the words explain?
Nakedly walking on broken glass
This clearly breeds the painI talk too much perhaps
I speak before I think
But were you really listening
As I climbed down from the brink?Those who can't, teach, the dictum rails
I'm learning all the time
But speak or do, we tell the tales
Is this salvation or our crime?I guess I'll keep on talking
And hope you listen well
I've got a few more years to stay
And still more tales to tell"Train Ride to Nowhere"
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
4/17/09 6:47 a.m. pdtGoing through the motions, making plans and drinking potions
Revolution notwithstanding, as we pass through understanding
Will we ever learn, with money tight our funds we burn
Spinning round and ready, never solid, stealthly steadySun comes up around again, same as yesterday, remember when
Eating hearty, then elimination, the train arrives at the next station
Summing up our feeling, no revsions, as we're reeling
Is the end at hand reclusive, going places, glances furtiveWords are flowing freely, all inclusive, touchy feely
Meaning is meandering, and truth is out philandering
Along on the ride together, through the many shades of weather
The train speeds past the station, with no regard to plans or reservation"Abre Los Ojos"
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
4/17/09 7:14 a.m. pdtA somewhat futile exercise inhibits ecstasy for some
And kindles absolution for others
What is black might for all intents and purposes be white
Perception isn't necessarily reality
Nothing is everything
And everything doesn't always make sense
Nothing really matters
inasmuch as everything does eventually
A walk in the garden elicits natural highs
Or else initiates allergies
One can sometimes find answers which seem to have
question marks attached
Youth dismisses age
And age yearns for youth
Those clouds might hide hailstorms of harrowing portent
or maybe just blue skies behind them
Open your eyes to all.
Questions,
Revelations,
Revolutions of intensity
Sanity sometimes seems crazy, and
what might seem preposterous is
business as usual
BEHIND THE POETRY: This is the second "spontaneous poetry" exercise for National Poetry Month, which is taking place during April in America. It contains five poems, all written right after each other. Most poets are answering the challenge of writing a poem a day for the month, which will create 30 new poems. I never do anything like everybody else, so I'm writing "poetry blocks", containing five poems apiece. I posted the first of these on April 8th. This is the second post, and I'll attempt to come up with 30 poems by the end of the month, in a few more postings. For today's group, I began thinking of subjects on the drive to work. I had the title "Imagimnasium: A wonderment workout" and a kernal of the poem in my head when I began writing. Each of the other poems just grew from there. I began writing at about 6am, and finished these five at about 7:30. The first poem took 10 minutes to write. The second: 19 minutes. The third: 20 minutes. The fourth: about a half hour. The fifth: 15 minutes.Writer Jeff Markowitz (doahsdeer) has been interviewing Xanga poets all month on his blog. My interview is set for April 23rd. (Next Thursday.) It's worth your while, espeically if you are a poetry lover, to check out his site, read the interviews, and visit the poets he is featuring, some of whom I hadn't read, and all of whom write some fine pieces. Check it out. MFN/ppf

Comments (21)
An interesting approach to the challenge of National Poetry Month. And thanks for the plug.
Jeff
I don't really understand alot of poetry but I will be sure and look for your thursday interview.
do you realize my birthday is May3rd ?
my goodness, you are prolific...nice stuff...:coolman:
Thanks Mornin Glorie...I enjoyed your poetry - gee I feel so intelectual smart now!
"I guess I'll keep on talking
And hope you listen well
I've got a few more years to stay
And still more tales to tell"
Amen
:wave: Wow! Five poems in succession! What "wordsmithing"! Communicating deep thoughts in rhyming words.
Congrats. :goodjob:
~~Blessings 'n cheers
You are truly gifted, my good man. Those poems are wonderful that they should be read and enjoyed by all Xangans.
I like "Abre Los Ojos." Did the title come from "Vanilla Sky"?
@doahsdeer - Dear Jeff, You're welcome. I wish there was even more awareness, however.
@jillcarmel - Dear Jill. Yes, dear. A couple of days after mine.
@reckless_eagle - Dear Victor. Thanks so much for the recommend. I'd love to see an ElectricPoetry entry of mine get on top blogs!
you're still younger though
very nice - i hope there's still wonder after we pass though
I especially enjoyed Imagimnasium ( A Wonderment Workout). It says to me to follow my path today and to see the world through eyes of what can be and not the stark reality of what is.
You know, there used to be this amazing poetry group by the name of Electric Poetry. Best poetry group ever. I still grieve its loss.
But then I've probably mentioned that a few thousand times before.
Congratulations on your poetic accomplishments.
Blue
love that word 'Imaginasium' (reminds me of Mr.Magorium's Magic Emporium, one of our fav's) i saw thee over on science_diction's site.
i am looking forward to that conversation ; )
and i'll be back, when it's not a sat.with my daughter, but wanted
to say, not all of us in the poetry challenge that mooncatblue threw down are willing to do interviews. this is not to say we wouldn't love
to have thee come visit to read our poems, too ; )
:wave: I checked doahsdeer site. I see that you and Flatpick46 are on list to be interviewed this mo., but I didn't take down the dates. So, if you want to remind your subs -- fine by me.
You who can just come up with these poems in rapid succession to meet NPM challenge are awesome to me.
~~Blessings, prayers 'n cheers
I liked "Train Ride to Nowhere" best. You are very gifted have the ability to look within and bring it to life in your poetry. I would love to be able to do that.
Thanks for sharing your poems, Mike. I have not written any poems in years, maybe I should change that.
I also wanted to thank you for linking my People's War poem. I really appreciate it.
Good poems. How are you coming on the thirty total poems?
I could never produce this much volume of quality poetry...I guess I just don't have the same amount of time and inspiration....
Over on my site, though, is Fifth Anniversary time!
love the poems mike
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