February 22, 2008

  • Kween of the Queens challenge: Before I was 10

    THINGS THAT HAPPENED TO ME BEFORE I WAS 10

    A blogtopic post for the Kween of the Queens blogring. Other entries can be found HERE.

    Get in your Way Back Machines!  Can you remember things that happened to you before you were ten?  List it, make up a story about it, write a poem about it, post pictures about it. . .any way you want to present it, I’ll link it up for you! 

    My tenth birthday arrived at about 5:30am on the morning of May 1st, 1963. I was in my second to last month of the fourth grade. Let’s pretend that miraculously Xanga was around back then. (The servers would have been enormous and taken up half a city block, and of course John wan’t born yet, but hey, “any way you want to present it” is the instruction.) Let’s pretend that I just signed up for Xanga service (there were less pedophiles in 1963 so it was safe for 10 year olds to create blogs!) and I have just written my first blog entry. (I wrote it on sideways pieces of 8×10 paper with both thick and thin lines (to differentiate between the upper and lower case letters) and my mother typed it up for me on the new “computing machine” that connects with the “xangasphere.” Mom corrected some of the grammar but left it mostly as is, even though I wasn’t writing quite as well at the age of ten.

    la1963 Here we go:

    I’m really excited about summer coming. My library card is already worn out. The first book I’m gonna read are a biography of Harry Houdini. Magic is really neat, and maybe I’ll learn some tricks, but I doubt it. According to the Reader’s Digest Treasury book mommy bought for us, Houdini buried all his secrets with him.

    My teacher this year was Mrs. Walters. I think I was spoiled by having a man teacher last year. Mr. Curtis. But Mrs. Walters is neat. She’s tall with grey hair, but not “old looking” like my 2nd grade teacher Mrs Christman, who was also fat. I liked Spelling best this year. It’s always neat to learn new words, but most of the kids don’t care. Lucy is smart too, and I like her. But she likes Greg, and  Mommy doesn’t let us out of the yard to play, so even though I could visit Lucy down the street, I’m not allowed to, so we don’t talk much after school. Greg’s my best friend, but he’s not so smart.

    Since this is the first time I’m doing this “blogging” thing for extra credit. Some of the kids think I’m a pansy cause I like to read and get extra credit. But all the teachers like me. Mommy is in the PTA and she helps out all over the school, so most of the teachers know me even if they haven’t taught me. I still remember when Mrs. Malin in the first grade showed me the school library when I tired of all those “See Dick run” books. Then I got my library card for the big library over town which was even more wonderful So many books stacked three or four times higher than my head! And so many words. I bet you could be the smartest kid in the world if you read all those books!

    I’m looking at my paper machier brontosaurus I made this year for Art. Danny hasn’t broken it yet, and if he does I’ll kill ‘im. All the other kids in class made much smaller things, but I wanted to make the biggest artwork, and I did. I used multiple balloons and Mrs.Walter had to help me, but Bronty is over three feet long. After Spelling, I think I like Art best. I also made some neat clay things. Everybody did the “hand” where we put our hands in clay and then decorated it, but I did a “monster” and scared some of the girls.

    We had square dancing in the “cafetorium” (that’s what Mommy and the teachers call the cafeteria when it’s used as an auditorium.) for the first time this year. I really like dancing. I always like it when I’m paired with Lucy, but it doesn’t last long, because we change partners all the time. At the box social this year I picked Sonya’s box. It was fried chicken, but a little cold. Sonya is too skinny and tall. I prolly made Bronty so big cause I’m so short. Only Willard is shorter than me. I make sure the bigger kids don’t pick on him. (And Miguel makes sure some of the bigger kids don’t pick on me.)

    At home Daddy is getting ready to build the new bedroom and bathroom for he and Mommy. I helped out with laying the plumbing pipes in the ground. Daddy says I’ll be a “good handyman” when I grow up cause I’m learning so much about construction. When he finishes building the “addition”, then maybe I and Danny will have separate bedrooms. That’s what he promised. We have lots of toys, but we keep them in the toy boxes when we aren’t playing so the room isn’t too crowded.

    I saw a movie on TV the other day which really was strange. Danny and I like Elvis movies and Frankenstein, and we love to watch Chiller Theater and Strange Tales of Science Fiction on weekends. This movie was different. It was called “Citizen Kane” and was about a man’s whole life. It looked different than any of the movies we watch. If I could someday make a movie like this it would be neat. I don’t know how they make the movies, but I really like them. This summer Mommy signed us up for the matinee program at the El Monte Theater again. They show lots of Elvis movies and shows like Jack the Giant Killer.

    Well, I should get lots of extra credit for this. It’s almost time for supper, and Mommy’s making meat loaf which smells good. Goodbye.


    The photo is my fifth grade school photo (I’m at work so don’t have my fourth grade photo available) backed by the house I grew up in. The photo of the house was taken in 2004. When I lived there, the fence was made of rocks inserted in concrete. I was very disappointed when returning to El Monte to take photos of childhood places that the “home made” fence had been removed by later owners.  BTW, it’s not too late to “ask me a question” about any subject for the blogtag challenge. I’ve gotten some great questions, but want to give everybody a chance to ask me something!

Comments (35)

  • Hello Mike, and no, no need to introduce.  Some say you are like a legend here.

    Nice way you did this post, and I enjoyed reading it.  Thanks for stopping by! 

  • A legend indeed!! If I had a badge that is the badge I would like to give you Mike. You are a very respectful little boy. You and Danny seems to be good pals? Did you get your own room in the end?

  • Maybe you’re smelling the burgers I just got done cooking
    I like the way you wrote this. Sounds like good warm fuzzy kid memories. It was good to read. After the teeth/jaw story, I had this mental idea that you had a very dark childhood.

    You really should draw more. I would be very flattered if I offered inspiration to actually make it happen! That’s the best kind of compliment to me.

  • Very creative!  I like the background effect in your pic too.

  • @CndFrnd - Dear Cindy, Legend, eh? Well thank you so much. You really made my day, that’s for sure.

    @Zeal4living - Dear Jurgens, I talk to my brother on the phone sporadically, but although we were very close siblings until I graduated from high school, we drifted apart after that. I finally got my own room in my senior year of high school. Dad finally finished the years long renovation, and then Mom wanted to move out of the area because of the influx of Latino households in the neighborhood.

    @oceanstarr - Dear Ocean, It just so happens I have most of my early childhood chronicled in my series of essays called “Childhood in Los Angeles”. in case you’re interested in hearing more about the young Mikester.

    @llibra - Dear Linda, I wanted the background to look a little like the knotty pine panelling in our kitchen when I was growing up.

  • What a clever presentation.  I like art class too. :giggle:

  • Oh well done MiLord!

    An enjoyable presentation and read once again! (I am never disappointed!)  Reading this over reminded me of some of my grade school activities, although I was just a first grader in school while you were in what we called “the upper grades”.  I believe I’ve said this before, but you are the same age as my dearly departed brother (we two were the closest in our family), so reading this really tugged at some heart strings.  He used to walk me home after school each and every day.  Great entry that has been linked and starred!~Kween

  • I think all my elementary school teachers were women. Sometimes we had teacher’s helpers who were men…maybe teachers in training?

  • My birthday is pretty close to that. May 12. But I wouldn’t be born for another 13 years.

    RE your previous post: I found a good question for you: In a book I’m reading a teenager’s (male) friend (Female) must magically transform her apearence so she looks like him. (This way she can act as a decoy) Apparently the transformation is a  anatomically accurate right down to the character’s bad eyesight. (And you can guess otherthings as well.)

    Do you think it would be weird for you to see one of your friends (Refering to oposite gender of course but to even same gender as well.) take on your form like that?

    Like I said in my last comment: this is meant to be a philosophical question.

  • Awesome way to combine the times! And the photo of you is adorable. You combined all the aspects of the past to create a great visual Great work! Thanks for the excellent read*

  • Good read very well done in the fact of your a really good writter but I truly felt that I was reading something that a ten year old had written through most of this which I know was the point…… NICE JOB thats all Im tryin to say….

  • I am so happy that getting a library card was one of the things you included!  I too, remember square dancing in the 4th grade.  I think it must have been an acceptable phys ed alternative in the 60′s!  I was not good at it!

    I checked out your Sherman and Mr. Peabody.  Very Fun!

  • I remember the day I told my mother that I wished I was an only child and that she should have stopped after having me.  I was very cheeky 16 year old who was sick to death of the all the household chores that a large family can create. It is a miracle that I lived to tell the tale!

  • @Adamission12 - Dear Adam, Thank you for noticing. I revised and edited after writing to make sure I cut out any words I might have not known at the age of ten, and I deliberately left some grammatical mistakes. (But hopefully not misspellings, cause Spelling WAS my favorite subject.

    @bammy_times_three - Dear Debbie, You might be interested in my essay entitled “An Essay Detailing the Writing Process” which details my love of both reading and writing.  

  • Great post! I’ve read some of my writing when I was 10, and it was pretty terrible! It’s amazing I can put a sentence together at age 26.

  • I like the way you did that-writting from the voice of a 10yr old boy.  I remember the summer between 9 and 10yrs and it lasted forever.

  • Dear Mike,

    Reading and spelling were my favorite subject as well. . . math, well, not so much.  But I was always in the highest reading group in school and won more than my share of class Spelling Bee’s.  RYC:  Yes, it was my 14 yr. old sister who was getting married. . . shotgun?  Do you consider my mother telling my “to be” brother in law that if he ever did anything to hurt my sister that she’d kill him a shotgun?  I suppose it was in a way.  My niece is only 5 years younger than I am.  She and I were more like sisters than my sister and I.  As for my father, he wasn’t ever around much when I was little.  He was a reporter/writer at our local city newspaper and he had odd hours.  (Before I was born, in Kansas, he actually had his very own daily column in that local newspaper).  He was home on Sundays and he made breakfast for us all while I “manned” the toaster.  I do have some good memories of him.  However, when confronted with the ultimate question a child asks a parent who leaves the family, he came up with that lame excuse.  How could a father (yes, he was their father as well) desert his children?  You will read more on that course of emotion if you choose to read the Life Story chapters.  They are not in order, but they are heartfelt and full of memories.  As for the tramatic incident in the bathroom…really, it wasn’t so tramatic.  I hardly ever give it a though and rarely dwell.  It’s just something that happened and I grew up.  It’s on of those memories that I said that I was brilliant at putting away.  If it taught me anything, it was that being in the wrong place at the wrong time wasn’t a good thing!  Lessons, all of our lives are filled to the brim with them if we only notice! 

    I was thrilled to read that you actually put off watching your episode of Lost to finish reading my entry. . .imagine that!  And I was extremely euphoric as I am a champion Lost fan myself!  I “dvr” it each and every week!  I wait until the next day to watch it because then I can quickly run through all the commercials so that I am not left hanging at each and every break!

    Again, thanks Mike, for taking that important time to read my blog.~:)Jeri

  • I very much enjoyed this post Mike

  • I love the picture and they style you used to tell your story.

  • Hi Michael!  I totally LOVE this entry!  This is my favorite one out of all the entries I’ve ever read of yours!  Now, all your entries are excellent, but with this one, wow, I really felt like I was there, too, back in 1963!  SO cool!!!!  Thanks so much for sharing this!  I very much enjoyed it!!!!  :goodjob:  So creative!!!

    P.S. Handsome picture from back then and handsome profile picture from present day as well! :goodjob:  Cool Xanga tattoo!

  • Dear Mike,
    Your attention to detail is awesome. I heard your 10 year old self.
    xo~QE :fun:

  • :sunny:Hi Mike,

    Thanks for stopping by, yes you have been to my site before…my favorite subjects were reading & english, oh & art!

    It’s been a long time since anyone has called me Scroops…lols…sometime I may write how I got that nickname!

    Have a nice weekend.

    ~Linda~:fun:

  • Great post. I, too, was a very good speller at age ten. I detested Math, even though I most often got A’s. Thanks for your comments. I’m still pretty much daddy’s girl, which, even at a young age I understood was a driving force behind my stepsisters attitude. (Mostly because she would talk A LOT about it to me.) But she also taught me a lot of positive things, for which I am grateful. : )

  • I didn’t have enough time to read the whole post when I commented yesterday, so I only skimmed it. But I did read it last night and was impressed. (BTW: Citizen Kane is my all time favorite movie.)

    That was an ecellent Idea for a post so I decided that I’m going to “borrow” your I dea. I’ve pickeed a year and I’m try and pull every memory I can find and see if I can do a similar post to this. Extra props!!!

    Good one!

  • A super entry.

    I like what you have done if Xanga was around back then.

  • I liked your ‘take’ on this challenge.  You used the eyes of the boy to a good advantage in sharing with us.  Seeing things with your personal friends who were and were not close and why, helps me understand things a bit better.  Or at least understand them from a boy’s point of view. 

    I always had more boys for friends than girls.  I have mostly been of the opinion it was because so many of my playmates on my street were boys and boy cousins who lived around.  Even in high school I had lots of friends that were boys.  We probably would have gotten along well if I had lived nearby.  I read the books in the library at our small school….did I say most if not all of them? 

    I enjoyed your entry.

  • What an adorable way to remember the past! You sound like a rascal, just like now. And it has such a happy tone. I’m glad you had a nice childhood.

  • sweet entry….my mom made that same meatloaf and i have the recipe today…..

  • Thanks for stopping by my blog.

    What a wonderful entry. You certainly were cute!

  • never read your site and WHAT a shame…this was GREAT!

    hey, I am a HUGE Bette Midler fan…actually just went to see her on the Oprah show last month (had to send in a “biggest fan” video tape!)…if you go back and look thru my site, you’ll find out more…and look at my videos and a few pics…that will explain…

    of COURSE I know about Bette’s show in Vegas!! I am going this summer! 12th row orchestra seats, honey!

    thanks for your kind comments, too…stop by anytime!

  • LOL I love it the way you wrote this challenge.. It was way too cute!!  Makes me wonder did you really find Lucy and marry her for real?? or that didn’t happen?? 

  • Dear Mike,
    What a great entry! You’ve really put a fun twist to it. Your imagination is wonderful and it felt as though a young boy really did write it – only one who is a little smarter than most of his classmates :wink: . I’ve always enjoyed reading myself but I’m afraid I’ve never been very good at spelling. I always did well on the test – that route learning – but I am an awful speller. I’ve made jokes about this on xanga. And right now my spellcheck on word is messed up!!! I’m in such trouble.

    How sad for you to know you lost a twin sister at birth… I hope this wasn’t horrible negligence on the doctor’s part. *shudder* That’s pretty scary about your head too.. Makes me wonder what was going on in the delivery room. I had older half siblings too and it was always known but not always understood. Only one had a different last name and I don’t know how old I was before I understand that. I can remember being very confused. So I grew up constantly in a state of confusion ….

    I think in some cases children don’t fully understand what’s going on – the gravity of it – so it does in fact cushion them for awhile. I think children need that safety net for traumatic events. At the same time children understand more than adults often give them credit for. See – confusing.

    Peace always,
    Jane

  • Dear Mike,

    Great entry! I really enjoyed reading this from the perspective a school boy. That was a great approach! I’m afraid I don’t remember many of my early teachers, and a lot of the day to day stuff is just gone — but I love to read other people’s writings about their memories, especially when their memories are as clear as yours apparently are! I hope you and your brother got your own rooms and that one day Lucy realized which friend was the best choice!!!

  • I love that you wrote in the present tense. It really gave a lot of life to an already great story! I like the part about the square dancing. We also had to do that in elementary school and I absolutely hated it!

  • your a big computer man!!!! i’ve read lots of randomers blogs and you’ve comment on two of them, and now i’ve found your homepage. spooky!! oh well

    nice meeting you

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