July 4, 2004
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ElectricPoetry
Let’s set the Wayback Machine to 1971
There have been 16 poems transcribed into the 1971 section on ElectricPoetry. 1971, the year I graduated from high school, was the year in which I began to “bloom” as a poet. Never again have I been so prolific as in that glorious year so long ago.
From my 1980 “Introduction” to my volumes:
I began the year writing a comic “epic” about friendship. At the end of the year (I turned 18) I’d written about nearly every emotion I felt. I made it a practice to sit down and churn out poem after poem. Now as I look back upon my hopes and fears after living a little life, I find many poems very nearly prophetic. In “Depression IV” I wrote, “I have felt all the feelings without living all the life.” It was true. Even now I find I only repeat my themes from this period. I think I shall never be as productive as I was in 1971- even before I entered life from the “sanctity of highschool.”
MFN from the 1980 introductionHere are two of the poems I transcribed today:
“Failing to Bridge the Gap”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri 1971
They’re talking at me through the plastic barrier.
They’re yelling at me through the plastic barrier.
They’re screaming at me through the plastic barrier.
But the sound appears muffled
And their voices cannot reach my ears.They’re talking sensibly from the other side
Of the plastic barrier.
They’re yelling obscenities through the cloud
Of the plastic barrier.
They’re screaming with pain from the distance
Of the plastic barrier.
But they’re the only ones who know it,
And their voices cannot reach my ears.They tire of their bombasts
Through the plastic barrier.
So they talk to each other on their side
Of the plastic barrier.
And the ideas they exchange come from their side
Of the plastic barrier.
And they walk away slowly
Leaving me on this side alone.“Mary Plus Somebody”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri 1971
You’ve been looking at him with your
Yearning eyes.
Trying so hard
And so great to puncture him
And let him know about
That tender feeling inside your heart.
Each day you almost come close
To opening your mouth
And saying those
Three small words.And then you get to thinking
That maybe he doesn’t even
Care about you.
Then comes that day
You’ve been waiting for
For so long.
You’re right there with him
Talking with him betraying
Your feelings.
Then something slips
And you see the sparkle
Adorning his eyes.
And you don’t know how it’s happening
As he confirms those
Things he’s held back all along.Sun slaps into your brain
The warmth slides
Into your body.
Your smile tells him your deepest thoughts.
And he says your three words
For you..
Comments (2)
I enjoyed “Failing to bridge the gap” and thought i’d better let ya know, ‘cuase it pisses me off when folks read my site and don’t comment.
“Mary plus somebody” is pretty good too, but i have a pre-disposed prejudice against love poems. hmmm. that makes me think maybe i should write some just to be evil and inflict nausea on other people.
-Xav
That sounds like “Angel plus Sumbody”. So you read minds and hearts too. lol This touched me right in the heart. Wonderful!!! :heartbeat: